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There is no doubt that these days have a journey with a group becoming increasingly popular. The question is, is it vaital to have a guide? in terms of positive side, having someone who is an expert in a place you have never visited before, will make your trip much easier, and you supposed to spend it on activity or even food will be less than if you were on your own. However, marketing nowadays their mission itis promote to what they offer it might have a good advertisement but this will not grauntee you that is going to be affordable. in conclusion, knowing where you should go and what you you ought to do it is no need for a guide all you have to do is using technology, thum have a look at people`s trips and diffinetly you will experience the best tours.
There is no doubt that these days have a journey with a group becoming
increasingly
popular. The question is, is it
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vaital
to have a guide?

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in
terms of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
side, having someone who is an expert in a place you have never visited
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
, will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your trip much easier, and you supposed to spend it on activity or even food will be less than if you were on your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.

However
, marketing nowadays their mission
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itis
promote to what they offer it might have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
advertisement
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this will not
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grauntee
you
that is
going to be affordable.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
conclusion, knowing where you should go and what
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you you
ought to do it is no need for a guide all you
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have to
do is using technology,
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thum
have a look at
The character between 'people' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "people’s" (curly apostrophe) or "people's" (straight apostrophe).
people`s
trips and
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diffinetly
you will experience the best tours.

IELTS essay leadership leadership leadership leadership leadership leadership

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
145 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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