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describe manufactory orange juice

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The picture explains the process of producing fresh and concentrated juice of orange juice before it is sold in shop. Overall, there are various steps in the whole orange juice producing process, beginning with tranfer fresh oranges and ending with the delivery of orange juice to the customers. Firstly, fresh oranges are picked, loaded onto trucks and transferred to factory. Then, they is washed and juice is extracted with excess solid waste being used as animal feed. At this point in the process the fresh juice is delivered in refrigerated trucks for evaporation. At the next step, those orange juice are processed in an evaporation machine, where water evaporates into the air. Finally, they is packaged and transported to shop for selling to customers.

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 to the customers.

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fresh
 oranges are picked
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juice
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used
 as animal feed. At this point in the process the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdifferentcrispunusuallaterawhot
fresh
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juice
is delivered
 in refrigerated trucks for evaporation. At the next
 step, those orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
are processed
 in an evaporation machine, where water evaporates into the air. Finally
, they Use third-person plural verb with 'they': "are", "were".arewere
is
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