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Laughter is the best medicine

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“Laughter is the best medicine” suggests that laughter or good humor is beneficial to the health. It’s often use to remind someone who’s feeling stressed, worried, angry or disappointed. According to psychologists, laughter brings a lot of benefits for people such as relaxing the whole body, booting the immune system, protecting the heart, burning calories and even helping people to live longer, many many. Therefore, be laughing much to keep away doctors and negative emotion problems.
“Laughter is the best medicine” suggests that laughter or
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humor is beneficial to the health. It’s
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remind someone who’s feeling
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stressed
, worried, angry or disappointed. According to psychologists, laughter brings
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a lot of
benefits for
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such as relaxing the whole body, booting the immune system, protecting the heart, burning calories and even helping
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longer,
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IELTS essay Laughter is the best medicine

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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