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Last year, 2020, not only has presented some unforeseen challenges, but has also given me a tremendous opportunity to slow down and do some deep thinking around my life, my commitment to things I care deeply about, and my core values.

Last year, 2020, not only has presented some unforeseen challenges, but has also given me a tremendous opportunity to slow down and do some deep thinking around my life, my commitment to things I care deeply about, and my core values. However, the best thing I learned last year is being accommodating. At the beginning of 2020, I reckoned that everything was going great until the coronavirus came into waves. As we all know, because of this pandemic virtually everything was closed, ranging from kindergartens to huge airlines. During the period of covid-19 lockdown, I encountered a lot of life lessons. When the coronavirus first visited our home and affected my family members, I did not know what to do: I was taken aback and asked myself whether it was the end or we would get through this period. While my sister and mother were at hospital, I accompanied by my other family members and relatives attempted to help them as much as we could: every day we would send to them slow foods, fruits, vegetables and other essential things so as to get them back as soon as possible. Finally, thanks to Allah, they recovered and returned to us. Afterwards, I did really care about them until they fully recuperated from being affected by coronavirus. During the covid-19 outbreak, apart from coronavirus there were another incidences that brought about grief. On May 1, after five days of severe storms, a dam wall at the Sardoba reservoir in the region of Sirdaryo collapsed and water poured through a breach onto cotton fields and villages. As a result, local people were abject as they lost their everything. More than 100. 000 people were evacuated from Sardoba and were sent to neighborhood cities. Seeing all of these scenarios, I really wanted to contribute my assistance. I volunteered as a packer in the base of foods, and I used to make every package filled with all the necessary groceries for other volunteers who would distribute them to those people in need. To conclude, notwithstanding the ordeals of 2020 which I managed to get through, it played a pivotal role in my life.
Last year, 2020, not
only
has presented
some
unforeseen challenges,
but
has
also
given
me a tremendous opportunity to slow down and do
some
deep thinking around my life, my commitment to things I care
deeply
about, and my core values.
However
, the best thing I learned last year is being accommodating.

At the beginning of 2020, I reckoned that everything was going great until the coronavirus came into waves. As we all know,
because of this
pandemic
virtually
everything
was closed
, ranging from kindergartens to huge airlines. During the period of
covid-19
lockdown, I encountered
a lot of
life lessons. When the coronavirus
first
visited our home and
affected
my family members, I did not know what to do: I
was taken
aback and asked myself whether it was the
end or
we would
get
through this period. While my sister and mother were at hospital, I accompanied by my other family members and relatives attempted to
help
them as much as we could: every day we would
send
to them slow foods, fruits, vegetables and other essential things
so as to
get
them back as
soon
as possible.
Finally
, thanks to Allah, they recovered and returned to us. Afterwards, I did
really
care about them until they
fully
recuperated from being
affected
by coronavirus.

During the
covid-19
outbreak, apart from coronavirus there were another incidences that brought about grief. On May 1, after five days of severe storms, a dam wall at the
Sardoba
reservoir in the region of
Sirdaryo
collapsed and water poured through a breach onto cotton fields and villages.
As a result
, local
people
were abject as they lost their everything. More than 100. 000
people
were evacuated
from
Sardoba
and were
sent
to neighborhood cities. Seeing all of these scenarios, I
really
wanted to contribute my assistance. I volunteered as a packer in the base of foods, and I
used
to
make
every package filled with all the necessary groceries for other volunteers who would distribute them to those
people
in need.

To conclude
, notwithstanding the ordeals of 2020 which I managed to
get
through, it played a pivotal role in my life.
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IELTS essay Last year, 2020, not only has presented some unforeseen challenges, but has also given me a tremendous opportunity to slow down and do some deep thinking around my life, my commitment to things I care deeply about, and my core values.

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359 words
5.5
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