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last 20 years tthere is significant development in the IT sector

last 20 years tthere is significant development in the IT sector QLAO9

Last 2 decade has shows the enormous progress in the advancement of IT department that has change the life of people. However, Some expert believe that it will be having detrimental effect on people life. From my perspective I majorly disagree with this point of view and my inclination are discussed in the ensuing paragraph. To commence with the advantage of IT The foremost one is the development in the communication sector, introduction of email has made the life of professional more easy as they can send any information or detail to anyone around the world more easier, faster and more secure because it is end to end encrypted that does not allow intruder to access the source. Furthermore, The World Wide Web (www) means that people can gain the knowledge from each and every field weather it is news, Medical advice aor even online education is also done with the help of internet. To illustrate, with the advancement in IT sector enables businessman to start their own business on internet by creating their own page like Go Daddy. com.

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shows
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change
 the life of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. However
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expert
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send
 any information or detail to anyone around the world Use only "easier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.easier
more easier
, faster and more secure This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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end
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end
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allow
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 even online education is also
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help
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start
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 business on internet by creating their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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. 