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Farming and hunger main cause

Farming and hunger main cause pXbAy
Even though technological revolution has improved the way of farming, many people around the globe are suffering from the hunger issue. I will explain the main cause behind this situation and suggest few prudent practices to overcome from this catastrophe. To conclude, undoubtedly the world is going through the food shortage despite of having modern agricultural techniques due to people are being ignorant and their reckless attitude towards their food waste. It would be better if people, governments and scientists work together in order to resolve this issue, hunger will not an issue for the future.
Even though
technological revolution has
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improved
the way of farming,
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many
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people
around the globe are suffering from the hunger issue. I will
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explain
the main cause behind this situation and suggest few prudent
The verb 'practices' is used with the gerund form: "practices overcoming".
practices to overcome
from this catastrophe.

To conclude
,
undoubtedly
the world is going through the food shortage
Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
despite of
having modern agricultural techniques due to
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people
are being ignorant and their reckless attitude towards their food waste. It would be better if
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people
,
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governments
and scientists work together in order to resolve this issue, hunger will not an issue for the future.
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IELTS essay Farming and hunger main cause

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  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
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