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Large international companies are becoming more powerful. Is this a negative development? Do you agree or disagree?

Large international companies are becoming more powerful. Is this a negative development? 3YVjm

Our globe is developing in a rapid and exponential manner. Industries around the world are becoming more and more independent and powerful. However, a number of Scholars have a belief that it is a negative development. I strongly agree with that point. To start with, our planet has new technologies and the growth of our countries is immensely fast. Nowadays, Each and every year new ventures and brand new companies are establishing. They are providing services from lifestyles, medicines i. e. , pharmaceutical drugs, automobiles and smart gadgets like our smart-phones and laptops. There are various huge firms are also working in the field of social media for example, tweeter and face-book. These large enterprises set their own rules and work culture. For Instance, When Indian government introduce an new IT regulation than tweeter says that the company has its own rules and for almost two months tweeter did not introduce this rule in its India office. Apparently, Some individuals have a view that as the nations around the world transforming, these multi-national companies also has a greater impact on the economical development of these nations. Due to working of these firms, Public now have a varieties of facility which they do not have a decade ago. According to some researchers large firms around the globe also has some positive impact on a nation financial growth. In Conclusion, It is a great fact that to having a number of international companies in your home state is superior. On the contrast, these large firms should also obey the rules and regulations of their host countries.

Our globe is developing in a rapid and exponential manner. Industries around the world are becoming more and more independent and powerful. However
, a number of Scholars have a belief that it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 development. I strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with that point.

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start
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new
 technologies and the growth of our countries is immensely
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fast
. Nowadays, Each and every year You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
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 ventures and brand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
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firms
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, tweeter and face-book. These large enterprises set their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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rules
 and work culture. For Instance
, When Indian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 introduce Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 IT Use "(regulation)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(regulation)
regulation
 than tweeter says that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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rules
 and for almost two months tweeter did not introduce this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rule
 in its India office.

Apparently
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 individuals have a view that as the nations around the world transforming, these multi-national You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
also
 has a greater impact on the Did you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?economic
economical
 development of these nations. Due to working of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoughsturdysolidhardunyieldingsubstantial
firms
, Public This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 have Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a variety" or simply "varieties"?a varietyvarieties
a varieties
 of facility which they do not have a decade ago. According to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 researchers large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoughsturdysolidhardunyieldingsubstantial
firms
 around the globe also
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 impact on a nation financial growth.

In Conclusion
, It is a great fact that to having a number of international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 in your home state is superior. On the contrast, these large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoughsturdysolidhardunyieldingsubstantial
firms
 should also
 obey the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatutedecreeprecedentguidelineregulationruling
rules
 and regulations of their host countries. 