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There are a considerable number of differences between large families and small families. First, we consider financial terms that means in the small family is more attainable to live better and simply compared to a large family. In my view, living in the small family is easier than large family because children draw more attention from their parents and they can improve themselves financially as soon as possible. Todays, most drawbacks are solved by money and the children living in the small family are more supplied. , additionally can sharpen their features, their mindset, and their skills with a adequate time and supportive parents.
There are a considerable number of differences between large
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small
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.
First
, we consider financial terms that means in the
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small
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family
is more attainable to
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live
better and
simply
compared to a large
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family
. In my view, living in the
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small
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family
is easier than large
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family
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because
children draw more attention from their
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parents and
they can
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improve
themselves
financially
as
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soon
as possible.
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Todays
, most drawbacks
are solved
by money and the children living in the
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small
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family
are more supplied.
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,
additionally
can sharpen their features, their mindset, and their
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skills
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adequate time and supportive parents.

IELTS essay large families and small families

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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