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The graph gives statistics about how many people who will learn three major world languages over the decade from 2030 to 2040. Overall, what stands out from the figure is that predicted number of students who will be learners of Spanish, English and Mandarin languages, seem to be in an upward trend between 2030 and 2040. The units are given in millions. Looking at the statistics, as regards estimated number of Mandarin learners will surge from 100 to 350 with the leapfrog point by Spanish learners' amount in 2026. Despite having twice as much learners Spanish wilo then grow marginally frim 200 to 500 with fifty fewer indicators than Mandarin over a decade period between 2030 and 2040. As regards, students who will learn English is a bant to hit the highest point by covering 550 in 2030, after that having grew gradually to 700 in the next four year, it will then drop in 610, after six year period. However, English language learners are set to reach a peak with 750 in 2040 by making about 200 followers than the others
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of Spanish, English and Mandarin languages, seem to be in an upward trend between 2030 and 2040. The units are
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in millions. Looking at the statistics, as regards estimated number of Mandarin
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200 to 500 with fifty fewer indicators than Mandarin over a decade period between 2030 and 2040. As regards, students who will learn English is a
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Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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