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language is the key factor to intergrate. how to learn a language

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Nowadays, many people want to go abroad to explore and expand their knowledge. In order to intergrate to each others, the key factor is language. Here are some ways can help you to learn a language. The key factor when you learn a language is the new words. The more vocabulary you have, the easier it will become to learn a language. Because it is a basis of all language, use to express our thoughts, feeling, to share information and to understand others. There are a lot of ways to learn vocabulary but the most commom ways is learn though movie and music. There is a huge of vocabulary, from easy to pronouce to the beautiful word, you can turn on the subtitle and note the new word, then learn by heart all of these word. Making new friend also is a good way to learn language, escepcialy is a foreigner. They are the people use the language you learn as a mother tounge, so they know how to use it. Having a friend that know the language you learn can help you a lot of thing, you will be able to practice whenever you want without self-conscious. More over, because it is your friend, you might feel more comfortable with slag, intonation and mannerism Overall, there two above are just one of many ways to learn a laguage. But it still is very effective
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, the key factor is
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language
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the most
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vocabulary, from easy to
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, you will be able to practice whenever you want without self-conscious. More over,
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it is your friend, you might feel more comfortable with slag, intonation and mannerism

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IELTS essay language is the key factor to intergrate. how to learn a language

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
234 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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