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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? v.8

Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? v. 8
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is labour-saving devices are reducing human effort. Some people believe that these devices make our daily work easier. On the other hand, others argue that these devices bring more complications into our life. As such, there are both merits and demerits, this essay will explain how these devices help in reducing mental stress in detail. Firstly, the most preponderant effort saving devices like washing machines and vacuum cleaners can reduce time consuming household duties; however, the remaining time can be spent on other activities and reduce physical stress and strain in this busy modern lifestyle. For instance, researchers seemed that technological devices save almost half of the energy consumption compared to manual work. Needless to say, latest household devices can save both time and money. Secondly, another pivotal aspect is that modern technology can eliminate human intervention in day to day activities and save natural resources from decline. Moreover, with limited natural resources and energy this latest technology is the best solution to reduce carbon footprint. For example, many experts suggest that dishwashers consume very limited water compared to manual dish washing and the remaining recycled water can be used for other purposes. Hence, labour-free devices reduce human stress and strain in many ways. In conclusion, one can clearly understand that to cope up with busy lifestyle time is a main constraint and to have enough leisure time to spare. Finally, the role of recent technology is too dire to ignore.
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make
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hand, others argue that these
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devices
bring more complications into our life. As such, there are both merits and demerits, this essay will
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how these
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devices
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in reducing mental
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in detail.

Firstly
, the most preponderant effort saving
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devices
like washing machines and vacuum cleaners can
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reduce
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time consuming
household duties;
however
, the remaining
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time
can
be spent
on
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other
activities and
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reduce
physical
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stress
and strain in this busy modern lifestyle.
For instance
, researchers seemed that technological
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devices
save almost half of the energy consumption compared to manual work. Needless to say,
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latest
household
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devices
can save both
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time
and money.

Secondly
, another pivotal aspect is that modern technology can eliminate human intervention in day to day activities and save natural resources from decline.
Moreover
, with limited natural resources and energy this latest technology is the best solution to
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reduce
carbon footprint.
For example
,
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many
experts suggest that dishwashers consume
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very
limited water compared to manual dish washing and the remaining recycled water can be
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used
for
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other
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Hence
,
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labour-free
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devices
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reduce
human
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stress
and strain in
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many
ways.

In conclusion
, one can
clearly
understand that to cope up with busy lifestyle
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time
is a main constraint and to have
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enough
leisure
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time
to spare.
Finally
, the role of recent technology is too dire to
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ignore
.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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Grammatical Range: 8.5
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Task Achievement: 8.5
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