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Mohammad is my only brother in blood. I wasn't good with him until my father got cancer in his liver and died, so everything changed and he became close to me. He is a computer teacher. He gets up at 7: 00 A. M to pick up his children at school. After that, he has breakfast in a restaurant which is bean cooked in Arabic way. Then he searches for passengers to pick them up wherever they want to go. Usually, he works to get extra cash because life has become too expensive. He takes the kids at 2: 00 and comes over for lunch. After that, he goes to work and returns at eight o'clock for dinner. Then he goes out to play cards with his friends, then he goes back to sleep at midnight.
Mohammad is my
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only
brother in blood. I wasn't
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good
with him until my father
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got
cancer in his liver and
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died
,
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so
everything
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changed and
he became close to me. He is a computer teacher. He
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gets
up at 7: 00 A. M to pick up his children at school. After that, he has breakfast in a restaurant which is bean cooked in Arabic way. Then he searches for passengers to pick them up wherever they want to go.
Usually
, he works to
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get
extra cash
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because
life has become too expensive. He takes the kids at 2: 00 and
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comes
over for lunch. After that, he goes to work and returns at eight o'clock for dinner. Then he goes out to play cards with his friends, then he goes back to sleep at midnight.

IELTS essay kjl; k'; 'l; kljbkhvjghkbjlh; kj'lk;

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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