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Mohammad is my only brother in blood. I wasn't good with him until my father got cancer in his liver and died, so everything changed and he became close to me. He is a computer teacher. He gets up at 7: 00 A. M to pick up his children at school. After that, he has breakfast in a restaurant which is bean cooked in Arabic way. Then he searches for passengers to pick them up wherever they want to go. Usually, he works to get extra cash because life has become too expensive. He takes the kids at 2: 00 and comes over for lunch. After that, he goes to work and returns at eight o'clock for dinner. Then he goes out to play cards with his friends, then he goes back to sleep at midnight.

Mohammad is my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 brother in blood. I wasn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 with him until my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 cancer in his liver and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
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so
 everything Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).changed, and
changed and
 he became close to me. He is a computer teacher. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 up at 7: 00 A. M to pick up his children at school. After that, he has breakfast in a restaurant which is bean cooked in Arabic way. Then he searches for passengers to pick them up wherever they want to go. Usually
, he works to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 extra cash This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 life has become too expensive. He takes the kids at 2: 00 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 over for lunch. After that, he goes to work and returns at eight o'clock for dinner. Then he goes out to play cards with his friends, then he goes back to sleep at midnight. 