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King all workers same cell in a company promotes harmony and respect among colleagues do agree or disagree

King all workers same cell in a company promotes harmony and respect among colleagues do agree or disagree A3LG1
Undoubtedly essential for every individual to fulfill their basic need. Moreover pink equal amount of income to every employee in organisation can promote harmony and respect to all the labours. I completely disagree with this given statement. There are plethora of reason to deny this which I shall discuss in upcoming paragraph. To start with cell is main factor which drive employees to work hard everyday to achieve success for the organisation it motivate workout work in a perfect way in the office some jobs required skills and level is struggle to the accomplished ask their importance of job position in employment sector have Hai pay scale than others because Walker get extra effort to get the job high salary in France work to do task with more enthusiasm. For instance if there is CEO of company e who has more responsibilities to ensure the success of company paying both same salary will unfair among them. Moreover some jobs required extra effort need extra skills while other need only little effort to complete that work where is the hair should be given according to the work as per demand for example IT manager and floor cleaner will get equal amount it may create several problems among them once you currently it will lead to less productivity of a company To conclude with according to the demand and need of employees the organisation should hire the people where as all employees should have different scale of money so they can put their efforts to their work this will lead to peaceful and respectful behaviour to all the worker at work site.
Undoubtedly
essential for every individual to fulfill their basic
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need
.
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Moreover
pink equal amount of income to every
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employee
in
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organisation
can promote harmony and respect to all the
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labours
. I completely disagree with this
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given
statement. There are plethora of reason to deny this which I shall discuss in upcoming paragraph.

To
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start
with cell is main factor which drive
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employees
to
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work
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hard
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everyday
to achieve success for the
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organisation
it
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motivate
workout
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work
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in a perfect way
in the office
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some
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jobs
required
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skills
and level is struggle to the accomplished ask their importance of
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job
position in employment sector have
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Hai
pay scale than others
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because
Walker
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get
extra
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effort
to
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get
the
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job
high salary in France
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work
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to do
task with more enthusiasm.
For instance
if there is CEO of
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company
e who has more responsibilities to ensure the success of
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company
paying both same salary will unfair among them.

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Moreover
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some
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jobs
required extra
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effort
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need
extra
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skills
while other
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need
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only
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little
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effort
to complete that
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work
where is the hair should be
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given
according to the
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work
as per demand
for example
IT manager and floor cleaner will
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get
equal amount it may create several problems among them once you
currently
it will lead to less productivity of a
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company


To conclude
with according to the demand and
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need
of
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employees
the
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organisation
should hire the
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people
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where as
all
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employees
should have
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different
scale of money
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so
they can put their
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efforts
to their
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work
this will lead to peaceful and respectful
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behaviour
to all the worker at
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work
site.
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IELTS essay King all workers same cell in a company promotes harmony and respect among colleagues do agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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