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Describe a friend you had when you were a child

Describe a friend you had when you were a child 1nLj7

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friends
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but
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today
 I am going to talk about a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 I met him when I was a child at the time when we shifted from hilly areas to plain areas and I The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'got'.never got
got never
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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near by
 me and I usually
 go there home with my father and I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
 to know his father he was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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friend
 office father one day we went there taking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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because
 one of my sister You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
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got
 engage name was Krishna also
be studied
 in the same school and in the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 he is successful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 his There isn't usually a preposition before "abroad". Did you mean "went abroad"?went abroad
went to abroad
 for his further
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).studies, and
studies and
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 his business whenever I met him I always feel proud and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 confident This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he was the best person ever Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).met, and
met and
 he has also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 charities and also
 nowadays his Possible typo: you repeated a wordworking
working working
 as Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "a" or "a" is left.a
a a
 as Charity This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 are saying nearby the road and was wondering wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it had been too long when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 him that was the time when I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
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friend
 is like my brother when I was a child