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describe a school you went to in your childhood

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To the best of my recollection, my school was located right in the middle of my hometown, and was within walking distance from my house. That’s why it only took me about 10 minutes to walk to school every single day. I don’t remember exactly but this school was built when I was in fourth or fifth grade. Back in the days when I was still studying at primary school, this school had always been my dream school because it looked incredibly beautiful. All the walls were painted in multiple bright colors, which really made it stand out from the surrounding buildings. I guess the main purpose of doing this was to create a sense of enjoyment for students to go to school every day. Today, I’m going to tell you about my secondary school, which was the place I spent nearly four years during my childhood.
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right in the middle of my hometown, and was within walking distance from my
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every single day. I don’t remember exactly
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this
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was built
when I was in fourth or fifth grade. Back in the days when I was
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, this
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had always been my dream
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because
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incredibly
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beautiful
. All the walls
were painted
in multiple bright colors, which
really
made it stand out from the surrounding buildings. I guess the main purpose of doing this was to create a sense of enjoyment for students to go to
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every day.
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, which was the place I spent
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four years during my childhood.
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IELTS essay describe a school you went to in your childhood

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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