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Killing animals and using their flesh is not right do agree aur disagree give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience

Killing animals and using their flesh is not right do agree aur disagree give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience KyENN
Undoubtedly the trend of killing animal for their flesh is increasing rampantly all over the world it is said that this phenomenon is not better for creators I fully agree with this notion that animal hunting is dangerous for fauna as it reduces their population this essay will shed the light on the impact of animal hunting on the other living creature. The first aspect I could mention regarding the impact of animal hunting it effects the food chain because most of the animals has depend on each other for their food. If they were killed by human beings the Other organisms will die with hunger. For instance, a report has been conducted by animal panel which is a recue team of animals proved that due to animal hunting most of the creatures aroun d 1. 2 million per 5 year had died with hunger. Therefore, if it is increasing with the same ratio that they will be there when there will be no flora and fauna on the earth. Moving further to the second drawback as the individuals who prefer to eat fresh can be E code bi disease. It animals are are suffering from any disease nevertheless there flesh eater will automatically be suffered. Thus, it affect the human beings also. To exemplify a disease in 2019 was spreaded in China where the Chinese people ate the bats. The Prakashan was that infection was traded worldwide full stop as a result, most of the people had died due to sickness from this infection. In the conclusion, no doubt, animal hunting for any purpose is dangerous for all the pieces, nonetheless the phenomena or to be banned by the government. The government need to take some strike action regarding this Se Na Meena because the animal also have right to live with Freedom
Undoubtedly
the trend of killing
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animal
for their flesh is increasing
rampantly
all over the world it
is said
that this phenomenon is not better for creators I
fully
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agree
with this notion that
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animal
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hunting
is
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dangerous
for fauna as it
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reduces
their population this essay will shed the light on the impact of
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animal
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hunting
on the other living creature. The
first
aspect I could mention regarding the impact of
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animal
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hunting
it effects the food chain
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because
most of the
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animals
has
Use past participle here: "depended".
depend
on each other for their food.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
they
were killed
by human beings the Other organisms will
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die
with hunger.
For instance
, a report has
been conducted
by
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animal
panel which is a
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recue
team of
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animals
proved that due to
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animal
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hunting
most of the creatures
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aroun d
1. 2 million per 5 year had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
with hunger.
Therefore
, if it is increasing with the same ratio that they will be there when there will be no flora and fauna on the earth. Moving
further
to the second drawback as the individuals who prefer to eat fresh can be E code bi disease.
It seems that the possessive pronoun "its" fits better in this context. Please verify.
It
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animals
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are are
suffering from any disease
nevertheless
there flesh eater will
automatically
be suffered
.
Thus
, it
Did you mean "affects"?
affect
the human beings
also
. To exemplify a disease in 2019 was
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spreaded
in China where the Chinese
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
ate the bats. The
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Prakashan
was that infection
was traded
worldwide full
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
as a result
, most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
due to sickness from this infection. In the conclusion, no doubt,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hunting
for any purpose is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
for all the pieces, nonetheless the phenomena or to
be banned
by the
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government
. The
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government
need to take
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some
strike action regarding this Se Na
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Meena
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because
the
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animal
also
have right to
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live
with
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Freedom
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IELTS essay Killing animals and using their flesh is not right do agree aur disagree give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience

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