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Keeping dogs is becoming ever more popular, although the homes and lifestyle of people are not suited to maintain dogs. What are the problems pet owners face and what solution can you suggest?

Keeping dogs is becoming ever more popular, although the homes and lifestyle of people are not suited to maintain dogs. What are the problems pet owners face and what solution can you suggest? wxd6N
Nowadays keeping pets at home has become a tradition. However, people do not have enough facilities and arrangements for dogs. There are numerous issues that people face with a pet at home. On the other hand, there are solutions for such issues, that will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs along with supporting statements. To begin with, The residential areas are very congested these days and people barely manage to live together in small houses. In such a situation, this is difficult to manage with a dog. This can cause a risk of infections, diseases, or allergies. Moreover, the owner of the dog must have to alert for his pet's diet, regular medical checkups, and so on. The busy routine of these days does not allow people to perform additional activities. Therefore, dog grooming is hard and back-breaking activity these days. Further, there are some considerable solutions that can be practice, to not to raise distant between animals and animal lovers. To maintain the separate dog house, the terrace area can be used. This way, dogs will occasionally come into the contact with family members and have fewer chances of health issues. furthermore, dogs should not keep at home alone, this way dogs get depressed easily. Thus, they always need a companion to spend time with and cheer with. This will make a healthier relationship between a pet and its owner. To conclude, Dogs are always said to be the best and loyal partner of humans in every term. Therefore people love to keep pets and make them a part of their family and life. Every problem come with a solution, so facing issues and find the path to make things possible is the only way live happily.
Nowadays keeping
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at home has become a tradition.
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people
do not have
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enough
facilities and arrangements for
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dogs
. There are numerous
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issues
that
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people
face with a pet at home.
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issues
, that will
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in upcoming paragraphs along with supporting statements.

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very
congested these days and
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people
barely
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live
together in
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small
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houses
. In such a situation, this is difficult to manage with a
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dog
. This can cause a
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risk
of infections, diseases, or allergies.
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, the owner of the
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dog
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must
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have to
alert for his pet's diet, regular medical checkups, and
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on. The busy routine of these days does not
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allow
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people
to perform additional activities.
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,
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dog
grooming is
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hard
and back-breaking activity these days.

Further
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considerable solutions that can be practice,
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to not to
raise distant between animals and animal lovers. To maintain the separate
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dog
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house
, the terrace area can be
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used
. This way,
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dogs
will
occasionally
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come
into the contact with family members and have fewer chances of health
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issues
.
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furthermore
,
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dogs
should not
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keep
at home alone, this way
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dogs
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get
depressed
easily
.
Thus
, they always need a companion to spend time with and cheer with. This will
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make
a healthier relationship between a pet and its owner.

To conclude
,
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Dogs
are always said to be the best and loyal partner of humans in every term.
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Therefore
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people
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love
to
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keep
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pets
and
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make
them a part of their family and life. Every problem
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come
with a solution,
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so
facing
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issues
and find the path to
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make
things possible is the
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only
way
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live
happily
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IELTS essay Keeping dogs is becoming ever more popular, although the homes and lifestyle of people are not suited to maintain dogs. What are the problems pet owners face and what solution can you suggest?

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