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More and more parents are deciding to educate their children at home rather than sending them to schools. What are the causes of this phenomenon?

More and more parents are deciding to educate their children at home rather than sending them to schools. What are the causes of this phenomenon? q6olX
Most of the parents are not in favour to educate their children in educational institutes instead they prefer homes. The main causes of this trend are parents are more concerned about the health and safety of the offspring and parents have a busy schedule. I believe that it is a negative development because the youth will not learn to cooperate with others in society. One of the major reasons for the change in people preference to educate their young ones from school to home is the busy routines of the father and mother. This is to that these days people don’t have time to look after their youth. Therefore, they like to plan home tuitions for students when they are available at their places. The second reason is the safety of the child. This implies that due to the covid situation, it is not safe for the young to go outside the house because there are high chances of getting the infection. So, everyone likes to make their children study online from home. For example, in India, during the pandemics, most of the schools are conducting their classes digitally to think about health concerns. It is negative progress in society because the new generation would not able to learn work with others. This is to say, when students would study in their comfort zone then they would not have any interaction with the outside world and because of, this they could not able to learn socializing with others and how to work in a team, which is a mandatory ability to progress in future. For instance, as compared to older people, the new generation always thinks about their personal benefits than society and are not like to prefer communicating with others members of the community. In conclusion, the reasons for shifting preference to study from institutes to homes are the hectic schedules of the guardians and the health safety of the kid. I think that it is a negative change because young people would not able to adjust to teamwork and learn to cooperate with others.
Most of the parents are not in
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to educate their children in educational institutes
instead
they prefer
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homes
. The main causes of this trend are parents are more concerned about the health and safety of the offspring and parents have a busy schedule. I believe that it is a
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negative
development
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because
the youth will not
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learn
to cooperate with others in society.

One of the major reasons for the
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change
in
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people
preference to educate their young ones from school to home is the busy routines of the father and mother. This is to that these days
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people
don’t have time to look after their youth.
Therefore
, they like to plan home
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tuitions
for students when they are available at their places. The second reason is the safety of the child.
This implies that
due to the
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covid
situation, it is not safe for the young to go outside the
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house
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because
there are high chances of getting the infection.
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, everyone likes to
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make
their children study online from home.
For example
, in India, during the pandemics, most of the schools are conducting their classes
digitally
to
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think
about health concerns.

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negative
progress in society
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because
the new generation would not able to
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learn
work with others. This is to say, when students would study in their comfort zone then they would not have any interaction with the outside world and
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because
of, this they could not able to
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learn
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socializing
with others and how to work in a team, which is a mandatory ability to progress
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in future
.
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, as compared to older
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people
, the new generation always
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thinks
about their personal benefits than society and are not like to prefer communicating with others members of the community.

In conclusion
, the reasons for shifting preference to study from institutes to
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homes
are the hectic schedules of the guardians and the health safety of the kid. I
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think
that it is a
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negative
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change
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because
young
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people
would not able to adjust to teamwork and
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learn
to cooperate with others.
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IELTS essay More and more parents are deciding to educate their children at home rather than sending them to schools. What are the causes of this phenomenon?

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