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Jullia Grant daily routine

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Jullia Grant is 21 years old and works as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. Every morning; she wakes up at 8 o clock and goes to work until 2 PM after that comes home and prepares launch for herself and her homemate; next cleans the dishes and washes the clothesIn the evening she studys book and relaxes with her friends; after that eats some food at beach and goes to ocean for doing some research.

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 Grant is 21 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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 and works as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. Every morning; she wakes up at 8 o clock and goes to work until 2 PM after that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
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 home and prepares launch for herself and her Possible spelling mistake found.homemadehome mate
homemate
; next
 cleans the dishes and washes the Possible spelling mistake found.clothespinclothes In
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 the evening she Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "studies", the plural form of the noun 'study'?studiesstudystuds
studys
 book and relaxes with her friends; after that eats This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 food at beach and goes to ocean for doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 research. 

IELTS essay Jullia Grant daily routine

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American English

1 paragraphs

78 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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