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Many different countries have a most solve the end of project as the same is some consider it is supposed to do document and whereas another is a considered it an active would love to discuss the both side and give your opinion

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In today’s modern world, globalisation has its impact on almost every accept accept our leave. many similar brands and shops, projects are spread all over the world. Some people think that it is a positive development, well another of the visuals hold that view add it is it has a generally an active drop meant I, however, side with the former view On the one hand, there are multifarious advantage of a similar shop and projects daughter the first and foremost is it that everyone have a discretion to buy best quality is a project so easily. of those, similar projects and shops can fulfil their desire. In case of that this happened there is a more and more shops and projects are available in the short distance, in that the customers have to travel less and get some centre projects in the least time, so that it saved the time as well as a fossil fuel daughter for intense, in Delhi there are many shops around near of people therefore, when they need emergency project they can easily buy it. On the other hand, there is a constable reason to lead toward the negative expansion, if in the countries, there are number of shops create jealousy into the shop owners because everyone want to sell their products very mush. Thus, Abandon tools in fact to selling of their products. so due to this reason after that involves environment of humans become a dangerous because sometimes shopkeepers start fighting with each other. 4 example in India there are huge population and some time it has seen that folks start fighting with each other To conclude after given the all reasons it is clearly seen that it have a many marriages but there is no doubt that they has also abundant demerits
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today
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globalisation
has its impact on almost every
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accept accept
our
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leave
.
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many
similar brands and
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shops
,
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projects
are spread
all over the world.
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Some
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people
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think
that it is a
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positive
development, well another of the visuals hold that view
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add
it is it has a
generally
an active drop meant I,
however
, side with the former view

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shop
and
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projects
daughter the
first
and foremost is it that everyone have a discretion to
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buy best
quality is a
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project
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so
easily
.
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of
those, similar
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projects
and
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shops
can fulfil their desire. In case of that this happened there is a more and more
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shops
and
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projects
are available in the short distance, in that the customers
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have to
travel less and
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get
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some
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centre
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projects
in the least time,
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so
that it saved the time
as well
as a fossil fuel daughter for intense, in Delhi there are
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many
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shops
around near of
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people
therefore
, when they need emergency
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project
they can
easily
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buy
it.

On the other hand
, there is a constable reason to lead toward the
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negative
expansion, if in the countries, there are number of
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shops
create jealousy into the
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shop
owners
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because
everyone
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want
to sell their products
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very
mush.
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, Abandon tools in fact to selling of their products.
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so
due to this reason after that involves environment of humans become a
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dangerous
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because
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sometimes
shopkeepers
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start
fighting with each other. 4 example in India there are huge population and
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some
time it has
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seen
that folks
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start
fighting with each other

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after
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the all reasons it is
clearly
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seen
that it have a
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many
marriages
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but
there is no doubt that they
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has
also
abundant demerits
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IELTS essay Many different countries have a most solve the end of project as the same is some consider it is supposed to do document and whereas another is a considered it an active would love to discuss the both side and give your opinion

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  American English
3 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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