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Many different countries have a more shops and projected as the same, some work on Siri it is supposed to document, whereas another consider it is an active discuss the both views and give your opinion

Many different countries have a more shops and projected as the same, some work on Siri it is supposed to document, whereas another consider it is an active discuss the both views and give your opinion wMVVe
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numerous
similar brands and market, strategy
are spread
all over the world. A
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number
of
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people
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think
that it is a beneficial development, well another of the visuals hold that view
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add
it is it has a
generally
an active drop meant I,
however
, side with the former view?

On the one hand, there are multifarious advantage of a similar emporium and enterprise daughter the
first
and foremost is it that everyone have a discretion to
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buy
the best quality is a deal
consequently
easily
. Of those, similar business and boutique can fulfil their desire. In case of that this happened there is a more and more retail store and strategy are available in the short distance, in that the customers ought to travel less and
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get
a
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number
of center business in the least time,
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so
that it saved the time
as well
as a fossil fuel daughter for intense, in Delhi there are a plethora of shops around near of
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people
therefore
, when they need emergency project they can
easily
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buy
it.

On the other hand
, there is a constable reason to lead toward the adverse expansion, if in the countries, there are
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number
of shops create jealousy into the shop owners due to the fact everyone wants to sell their products
supremely
mush.
Thus
, Abandon tools in fact to selling of their products.
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consequently
due to this reason after that involves environment of humans become a risky, due to the fact
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sometimes
shopkeepers
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start
fighting with each other. 4 example in India there are huge population and a
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number
of time it has
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seen
that folks
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start
fighting with each other

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the all reasons it is
clearly
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that it have a numerous
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marriages
on the contrary
there is no doubt that they have
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abundant demerits
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IELTS essay Many different countries have a more shops and projected as the same, some work on Siri it is supposed to document, whereas another consider it is an active discuss the both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
5.5
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