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Jobs are extremely important in our life

Jobs are extremely important in our life 7rA82
Job is a extremely important in our life. The employees spend a lot of their time on its. Consequently, it should be convenient, a good salary and a prefect insurance because it makes employees their loyalty for job. If a weather of job is bad, it will make the labours not ecstatic and effect the rate of products. For exampleifier, Egypt suffers from a lot of labours not delighted in their work which it lead to the labour works more than one to cover requirements of family. In conclusion, I think that my opinion I disagree about to complet in job not feeling relief because he will be a nervous and it is effecting to spend quality time with my family on future.
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employees their loyalty for
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. If a weather of
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, it will
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not ecstatic and effect the rate of products. For
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, Egypt suffers from
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not delighted in their work which it
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works more than one to cover requirements of family.

In conclusion
, I
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that my opinion I disagree about to
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he will be a nervous and it is effecting to spend quality time with my family on future.

IELTS essay Jobs are extremely important in our life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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