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Jobs are extremely important in our life

Jobs are extremely important in our life 7rA82

Job is a extremely important in our life. The employees spend a lot of their time on its. Consequently, it should be convenient, a good salary and a prefect insurance because it makes employees their loyalty for job. If a weather of job is bad, it will make the labours not ecstatic and effect the rate of products. For exampleifier, Egypt suffers from a lot of labours not delighted in their work which it lead to the labour works more than one to cover requirements of family. In conclusion, I think that my opinion I disagree about to complet in job not feeling relief because he will be a nervous and it is effecting to spend quality time with my family on future.

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