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He has more than 10 years of clinical experience in the treatment of sleep disorders and diseases of the nervous system. In addition, Dr. Amiri is the founder and director of Behrast Sleep Clinic and Jairus Neurology Clinic. And has a history of launching several startups in the fields of education, journalism and artificial intelligence. His books are usually short but concise and written in simple language, and he believes that doctors can play an important role in educating people about health by writing short and concise books.
He has more than 10 years of clinical experience in the treatment of sleep disorders and diseases of the nervous system.
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Amiri
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Behrast
Sleep Clinic and
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Neurology Clinic. And has a history of launching several startups in the fields of education, journalism and artificial intelligence. His books are
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concise and written in simple language, and he believes that doctors can play an
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important
role in educating
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about health by writing short and concise books.

IELTS essay job hunting for a medical doctor

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1 paragraphs
88 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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