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It is perhaps not unusual for individuals who wish to be involved in cancer research to have a personal connection to cancer, usually in the form of a relative or loved one suffering the illness. In my particular case, the death of my grandfather, stimulated my wish to make a contribution to human wellbeing. As I grew older, I reached the conclusion that, based on my academic and personal skills, the best contribution that I could personally make to save lives would take the form of a career in scientific research that sought to unlock the mysteries of cancers and work towards creating new treatments for the different forms of the disease. Love to help people, I studied medicine at Tehran University of Medical Science, Iran, then interested in molecular medicine, I chose pathology for my specialty. Willing to continue my education, I went to Spain in 2014, where I studied hematopathology. I was interested in learning all technological aspects associated with this activity such as immunohistochemistry, cytogenetics and molecular biology. My interest in going beyond the diagnostic activity led me to collaborate in a research project on diffuse large B-cell lymphoma by reviewing the pathology and phenotype of the cases. The project led to a publication in Leukemia where I was a coauthor. (Karube K et al Integrating genomic alterations in diffuse large B-cell lymphoma identifies new relevant pathways and potential therapeutic targets. Leukemia 2018) Back to my country, I tried to find a way to expand my knowledge in molecular pathology and genetics and I worked as surgical and clinical pathologist at Kasra Hospital, Tehran, Iran. Later I could enter Sylvester Comprehensive Cancer Center, Miller School of Medicine, Miami, FL, USA in 2016 as a research assistance where I was actively learning different molecular techniques for almost two years. This was a great opportunity for developing further my career. In addition, where possible, I visited different departments including molecular diagnostic lab, genetic department and cancer genetic clinic. My goal was to get more understanding of latest cancer treatment with targeted therapy and hereditary cancer syndromes.
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be involved
in
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cancer
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research
to have a personal

connection to
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cancer
,
usually
in the form of a relative or
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loved
one suffering the illness. In my particular

case, the death of my grandfather, stimulated my wish to
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make
a contribution to human
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wellbeing
. As I

grew older, I reached the conclusion that, based on my academic and personal
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skills
, the best contribution

that I could
personally
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make
to save
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lives
would take the form of a career in scientific
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research
that sought

to unlock the mysteries of
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cancers
and work towards creating new treatments for the
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different
forms of

the disease.
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Love
to
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help
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people
, I studied medicine at Tehran University of Medical Science, Iran, then

interested in
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molecular
medicine, I chose pathology for my specialty. Willing to continue my education, I

went to Spain in 2014, where I studied
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hematopathology
. I
was interested
in learning all technological

aspects associated with this activity such as
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immunohistochemistry
,
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cytogenetics
and
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molecular
biology.

My interest in going beyond the diagnostic activity led me to collaborate in a
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research
project on diffuse

large B-cell lymphoma by reviewing the pathology and phenotype of the cases. The project led to a

publication in Leukemia where I was a coauthor. (
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Karube
K
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et al
Integrating genomic alterations in diffuse

large B-cell lymphoma identifies new relevant pathways and potential therapeutic targets. Leukemia 2018)

Back to my country, I tried to find a way to expand my knowledge in
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molecular
pathology and genetics and

I worked as surgical and clinical pathologist at
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Kasra
Hospital, Tehran, Iran. Later I could enter Sylvester

Comprehensive
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Cancer
Center, Miller School of Medicine, Miami, FL, USA in 2016 as a
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research
assistance

where I was
actively
learning
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different
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molecular
techniques for almost two years. This was a great

opportunity for developing
further
my career.
In addition
, where possible, I visited
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different
departments

including
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molecular
diagnostic lab, genetic department and
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cancer
genetic clinic. My goal was to
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get
more

understanding of
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latest
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cancer
treatment with targeted therapy and hereditary
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cancer
syndromes.
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IELTS essay job hunting for a medical doctor

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
347 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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