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Japan is most beautiful country for me because i love every things there

Japan is most beautiful country for me because i love every things there bby8X
I really want to go to japan to study there, because I literally love japan and it’s my dream, i love everything there literally everything! The culture and the peoples there and i like the nature and alots of things, also the technology and buildings, also i like fuji mount and it’s the tallest mountain in japan and it’s looks amazing, i am so exited to go and i am very happy, to be honest i like korea also maybe korea and japan almost have the same culture but my favorite japan, What i like about korea is the food and culture and the nature but japan nature is better so if some one ask me about japan and korea and witch one i will choose of course i will choose japan!
I
really
want to go to
japan
to study there,
because
I
literally
love
japan
and it’s my dream,
i
love
everything there
literally
everything! The culture and the peoples there and
i
like the nature and
alots
of things,
also
the technology and buildings,
also
i
like
fuji
mount and it’s the tallest mountain in
japan
and it’s looks amazing,
i
am
so
exited
to go and
i
am
very
happy, to be honest
i
like
korea
also
maybe
korea
and
japan
almost have the same culture
but
my favorite
japan
, What
i
like about
korea
is the food and culture and the nature
but
japan
nature is better
so
if
some one
ask me about
japan
and
korea
and witch one
i
will choose
of course
i
will choose
japan
!
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IELTS essay Japan is most beautiful country for me because i love every things there

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