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It’s better to make wrong decision than make no decision at all. ” Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons or specific examples to illustrate your answer. v.2

It’s better to make wrong decision than make no decision at all. ” Give reasons or specific examples to illustrate your answer. v. 2
Everybody have to make a lot of decisions during their life. It is so much important to know deciding a wrong choice in any situation can help us in the future. Some people think it is logical not to do any thing when we believe our choice is wrong. However, some others feel that wrong decisions can assist us in the long run ahead. I think humans should decide wrong to thrive due to many obvious reasons. First, people can learn from their mistakes. So, if they allow themselves to pick some wrong decisions, they can analyze their bad outcomes happened due to their wrong choice. This can give them fundamental information about the issues with their decision. whereas, if they have not allow themselves to do a few wrong decisions, they have never had the chance and opportunity to rectify themselves. Secondly, normally, we should consider different solutions to understand the best suited pathway for any problem. Humans’ brains need a specific amount of information to solve any obstacle. Thus, generally, we cannot reach any valuable result if we have not learn some from other poor decisions mistakes. for instance, my friend Jim always had fear to decide about different incidents. He would pass the decision to another person whenever he confronts a delicet situation. Surprisingly, one time Jim was asked to prepare the schools camp for summer alone and there was no student to help him. Eventually, he decided to depend on himself for one time. He tried and made a series of wrong decisions but at last he noticed that the only thing which assist him to bring his best was these stupid first mistakes. so he find out that even there can be some thing useful in a bad choice. You must just not panic and understand your previous wrong decisions. Last but not least, anybody especially young generation should practice to master in any skill including a desion. So, making a wrong decision can help them in their future. Because they have no chance in the future for trying and practice. In conclusion, deciding about any thing can be fearful at first. It is crucial to let people decide some wrong decisions to bring some good in future.
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during their life. It is
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much
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important
to know deciding a
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wrong
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choice
in any situation can
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help
us in the
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future
.
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people
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it is logical not to do
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any thing
when we believe our
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choice
is
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wrong
.
However
,
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some
others feel that
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wrong
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decisions
can assist us in the long run ahead. I
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think
humans should decide
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wrong
to thrive due to
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many
obvious reasons.

First
,
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people
can learn from their mistakes.
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, if they
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allow
themselves to pick
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some
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wrong
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decisions
, they can analyze their
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bad
outcomes happened due to their
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wrong
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choice
. This can give them fundamental information about the issues with their
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decision
.
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whereas
, if they have not
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allow
themselves to do a few
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wrong
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decisions
, they have never had the chance and opportunity to rectify themselves.

Secondly
,
normally
, we should consider
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different
solutions to understand the best suited pathway for any problem. Humans’ brains need a specific amount of information to solve any obstacle.
Thus
,
generally
, we cannot reach any valuable result if we have not
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learn
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some
from other poor
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decisions
mistakes.
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for
instance, my friend Jim
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always had fear
to decide about
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different
incidents. He would pass the
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decision
to another person whenever he confronts a
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delicet
situation.
Surprisingly
, one time Jim
was asked
to prepare the schools camp for summer alone and there was no student to
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help
him.
Eventually
, he decided to depend on himself for one time. He tried and made a series of
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wrong
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decisions
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but
at last he noticed that the
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only
thing which assist him to bring his best was these stupid
first
mistakes.
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so
he
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find
out that even there can be
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some thing
useful in a
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bad
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choice
. You
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must
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just
not panic and understand your previous
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wrong
decisions.

Last
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but
not least, anybody
especially
young generation should
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practice to master
in any
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skill
including a
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desion
.
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, making a
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wrong
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can
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help
them in their
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future
.
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Because
they have no chance in the
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future
for trying and practice.

In conclusion
, deciding about
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any thing
can be fearful at
first
. It is crucial to
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let
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people
decide
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some
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wrong
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decisions
to bring
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some
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good
in
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.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS essay It’s better to make wrong decision than make no decision at all. ” Give reasons or specific examples to illustrate your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
373 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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