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It would be beneficial for society or individual if driverless cars would be widely used but extend agree or disagree

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reduced
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in subsequent paragraph with my opinion. There are my
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reduced
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low-income
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reported that wireless cards made by
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IELTS essay It would be beneficial for society or individual if driverless cars would be widely used but extend agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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