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It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people.

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. kLK3R

It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten. In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant

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