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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is better to spend huge amount of money on building modern buildings rather than repairing old buildings. Repairing dilapidated buildings usually cost more money and time because the building is weak and it could mean demolishing part of the building to a low level for proper setting of bricks and at times if the architect is not competent to maximize resources like cement sand and bricks it could result in spending more than proposed budget. Repair of old buildings could be for historical or reference purpose for example the first house in town or the first palace in the community. This type of building can be repaired so as to tell story or to shoe landmark achievement to unborn generation. Building of a modern housing is fine because new architectural design will be put in place and modern structure will be use for the house plan to make it durable. Modern building did not require extra effort from the architect because the architect will follow the house plan and pattern that has already been drawn and approved by the owner of the building. While some people think it is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings some people believe building modern building is the best. I want to agree with spending more on modern building because modern architectural design and better house building materials will be used and it can stand the test of time and fit into the modern architectural design and house plan.
It is better to spend huge amount of money on
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rather
than repairing
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. Repairing dilapidated
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buildings
usually
cost more money and time
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because
the
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building
is weak and it could mean demolishing part of the
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building
to a low level for proper setting of bricks and at times if the architect is not competent to maximize resources like cement sand and bricks it could result in spending more than proposed budget.

Repair of
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old
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buildings
could be for historical or reference purpose
for example
the
first
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house
in town or the
first
palace in the community. This type of
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building
can
be repaired
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so as to
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tell
story or to shoe landmark achievement to unborn generation.

Building of a
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modern
housing is fine
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because
new architectural design will
be put
in place and
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modern
structure will be
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use
for the
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house
plan to
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make
it durable.
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Modern
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building
did not require extra effort from the architect
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because
the architect will follow the
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house
plan and pattern that has already
been drawn
and approved by the owner of the building.

While
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some
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people
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think
it is too expensive to look after and repair
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old
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buildings
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some
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people
believe
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building
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modern
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building
is the best. I want to
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agree
with spending more on
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modern
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building
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because
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modern
architectural design and better
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house
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building
materials will be
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used
and it can stand the
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test
of time and fit into the
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modern
architectural design and
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house
plan.
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IELTS essay It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead.

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  American English
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248 words
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