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Why youngsters have communication gap with there family aa compared to the past....agree or disagree...

Why youngsters have communication gap with there family aa compared to the past. . . . agree or disagree. . . OVyKG
Nowadays, teenagers are not communicating with their families as compared to the earlier days. This is happening because of their busy schedule, numerous workload and gadgets. Was communication easy in earlier days. ? In this essay, we will discuss both point of views and accordingly conclude and agree with the statement. It is irrefutable that in the past people, whether, young ones or their family were less engaged as compare to recent days. Firstly, teenagers prefer to discuss futuristic plans with their family members as they were also available with them because everyone has ample of time to spend with their family. Secondly, individuals prefer to talk and discuss issues within their families because they were available at required times. For Example: - as per current statistics published in The Times Of India newspaper ealier days people do less work and have less tension and these days they are doing more work and do have more tension. Lastly, the discussion was always healthy as less amount of data was available online which lead to less number of arguments. Recently, individual prefer to trust the advice which is available over the internet and mobile. Due to this vast amount of information, these individuals do not require anyone to discuss something. In addition, family members are also not available to these individual's sometimes because of their hectic schedule of work life. Furthermore, these educational institutes and colleges also provide too much of task or assignments to the young ones, that they are also unable to get time for their family or approach them. Because of this individuals also prefer the thing which is available to make quick decisions in today's competitive world. To conclude, Due to the tight schedule of life sometimes family members are also not reachable, because of, which individual also prefer make their own opinion and decisions using the data already available to them. I strongly agree with this statement that communication gap is getting increased but it is benefited to the teenagers as they are able to make their independent decision because of this.
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both point of views and
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people
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were
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less
engaged as compare to recent days.
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,
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teenagers
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futuristic plans with their
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family
members as they were
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available
with them
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because
everyone has ample of
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time
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family
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individuals
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to talk and
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discuss
issues within their
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families
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because
they were
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available
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as per
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statistics published in The
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Times
Of India newspaper
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ealier
days
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people
do
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tension and these days they are doing more work and do have more tension.
Lastly
, the discussion was always healthy as
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less
amount of data was
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available
online which lead to
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less
number of arguments.

Recently,
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individual
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prefer
to trust the advice which is
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available
over the internet and mobile. Due to this vast amount of information, these
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individuals
do not require anyone to
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discuss
something.
In addition
,
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family
members are
also
not
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available
to these
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individual's
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because
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, these educational institutes and colleges
also
provide too much of task or assignments to the young ones, that they are
also
unable to
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time
for their
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family
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quick decisions in
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today
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sometimes
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members are
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their
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opinion and decisions using the data already
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available
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strongly
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agree
with this statement that communication gap is getting increased
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to the
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teenagers
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make
their independent decision
because of this
.
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IELTS essay Why youngsters have communication gap with there family aa compared to the past. . . . agree or disagree. . .

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
346 words
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