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it is supported by some that it is important to go to parenting courses to grow their children up.

it is supported by some that it is important to go to parenting courses to grow their children up. XlJWY
it is supported by some that it is important to go to parenting course to grow their children up. Now i try to discuss both sides on my essay. In fact, some young families may not know how look after their children. It is necessary to take part in parenting classes to that families. Also every parents want to bring up well brought and clever child. In this case parents should learn from professionals. It is difficult to have a bad child. however, it is strange to take lessons for parenting in some countries. Young families do not learn how to be a good parent despite they do not know about growing up a child. because of it is something strange, they feel shy. In addition, in many cultures several generations live together and parenting skills down from generation to generation and there is no need to have parenting classes. To sum up, I partly agree to this point of view due to some several reasons which i gave information about in my essay
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classes. To sum up, I partly
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IELTS essay it is supported by some that it is important to go to parenting courses to grow their children up.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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