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It is said adult rated food is key to deteriorate health how do you agree or disagree

It is said adult rated food is key to deteriorate health how 6aWd8
Everyone know that health is wealth. The majority believe that adult rated food is key to hazardous health. I agree with the statement of above stated notion in my impending textualTo commence with, adult rated food is harmful for health there are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but most preponderent on stems from the fact that. Firstly, adult rated food destroy the health because nowadays people give more preferences to these type of food for change their taste. As a result, they are suffering many health diseases by consuming these type of food instead of homemade food. Moving further, these type of food also cause of obesity because individuals are busy in their work they do not have enough time to make homemade food. Therfore, nowadays they are became lethargic as compare to past. For example, 80precent people are suffering from health issues. To conclude, while pondering over although the fact above, itis quite fair to say that adult rated food is deteriorate health because it cause many Harmful diseases.
Everyone
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health
is wealth. The majority believe that adult
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rated
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food
is key to hazardous
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health
. I
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agree
with the statement of above stated notion in my impending
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commence with, adult
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rated
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food
is harmful for
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health
there are myriad of reasons which will
further
elaborate this argument
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but
most
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preponderent
on stems from the fact that.
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, adult
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rated
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food
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destroy
the
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health
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because
nowadays
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people
give more preferences to these type of
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food
for
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change
their taste.
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, they are suffering
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many
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health
diseases by consuming these type of
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food
instead
of homemade
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food
. Moving
further
, these type of
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food
also
cause of obesity
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because
individuals are busy in their work they do not have
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time to
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make
homemade
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food
.
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Therfore
, nowadays they are
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lethargic as compare to past.
For example
, 80precent
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people
are suffering from
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issues.
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, while pondering over although the fact above,
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quite
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to say that adult
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rated
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food
is
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deteriorate
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health
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because
it
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cause
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Harmful diseases.
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IELTS essay It is said adult rated food is key to deteriorate health how

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
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