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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime is a direct influence of the increase in violence in media. To what extent do you agree with the above statement?

It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime is a direct influence of the increase in violence in media. 85Q2l
These days everything is within the reach of young generation with aid of the internet and commercial TV channels. The teenagers unlawful activities are totally impact by the growing conflicts over the social platform. The following paragraphs accord with the notion, and the supporting arguments will be provided to the viewpoint. The predominant justification to support the viewpoint is the teen's immature age to make decision between good and bad. This make them to copy those anti-social activities from the television, and perform it within their friend circle. To amplify this point, many national level debats are happening across the nation. Furthermore, there is no governing body to keep an eye over the complete network. This provide them the opportunity to release the undesirable element over the medium. Government and local bodies must conduct educational session at different level to bring awarness among the adolescent person. In compendium, I would like to ingeminate that earlier age of teens and no restriction over the companies enhance this concern.
These days everything is within the reach of young generation with aid of the internet and commercial TV channels. The
teenagers
unlawful activities are
totally


impact
by the growing conflicts
over
the social platform. The following paragraphs accord with the notion, and the supporting arguments will
be provided
to the viewpoint.

The predominant justification to support the viewpoint is the teen's immature age to
make
decision between
good
and
bad
. This
make
them to copy those

anti-social activities from the television, and perform it within their friend circle. To amplify this point,
many
national level
debats
are happening

across the nation.

Furthermore
, there is no governing body to
keep
an eye
over
the complete network.
This provide
them the opportunity to release the undesirable element
over
the medium.

Government
and local bodies
must
conduct educational session at
different
level to bring
awarness
among the adolescent person.

In compendium, I would like to
ingeminate
that earlier age of teens and no restriction
over
the
companies
enhance this concern.
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IELTS essay It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime is a direct influence of the increase in violence in media.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
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