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It is often argued that, few people think history is one of the major subject to study in school and some people say that science and technology is more important module as compared to history in modern world. In this essay I will discuss both side of this argument. To commence with, history is very important for new generation because it introduce to our past and bhid confidence in children mind and motivate them to do better in their life. To explain vit, so many times parents and grand parents give example such as The shaheed Bhagat singh how they invloed in old time to fight with British government for human Rights and anginat black law that made by them for example, In servy conducted by the indian government in which mentioned school child very motivated to their history subject and shows better results in examination as previous time.Thus, history is not ignore able thing for student because our ansester done so many great things for us and they gives always positive vibes to

It is often argued that, few people think history is one of the major subject to study in school and some people say that science and technology is more important module as compared to history in modern world. In this essay I will To commence with, history is very important for new generation because it introduce to our past and bhid confidence in children mind and motivate them to do better in their life. To explain vit, so many times parents and grand parents give example such as The shaheed Bhagat singh how they invloed in old time to fight with British government for human Rights and anginat black law that made by them for example, In servy conducted by the indian government in which mentioned school child very motivated to their history subject and shows better results in examination as previous time. Thus, history is not ignore able thing for student because our ansester done so many great things for us and they gives always positive vibes to KwowL
It is often argued that, few people think history is one of the major subject to study in school and some people say that science and technology is more important module as compared to history in modern world. In this essay I will discuss both side of this argument. To commence with, history is very important for new generation because it introduce to our past and bhid confidence in children mind and motivate them to do better in their life. To explain vit, so many times parents and grand parents give example such as The shaheed Bhagat singh how they invloed in old time to fight with British government for human Rights and anginat black law that made by them for example, In servy conducted by the indian government in which mentioned school child very motivated to their history subject and shows better results in examination as previous time. Thus, history is not ignore able thing for student because our ansester done so many great things for us and they gives always positive vibes to new generation. It is often argued that, few people think history is one of the major subject to study in school and some people say that science and technology is more important module as compared to history in modern world. In this essay I will discuss both side of this argument. To commence with, history is very important for new generation because it introduce to our past and bhid confidence in children mind and motivate them to do better in their life. To explain vit, so many times parents and grand parents give example such as The shaheed Bhagat singh how they invloed in old time to fight with British government for human Rights and anginat black law that made by them for example, In servy conducted by the indian government in which mentioned school child very motivated to their history subject and shows better results in examination as previous time. Thus, history is not ignore able thing for student because our ansester done so many great things for us and they gives always positive vibes to new generation
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IELTS essay It is often argued that, few people think history is one of the major subject to study in school and some people say that science and technology is more important module as compared to history in modern world. In this essay I will To commence with, history is very important for new generation because it introduce to our past and bhid confidence in children mind and motivate them to do better in their life. To explain vit, so many times parents and grand parents give example such as The shaheed Bhagat singh how they invloed in old time to fight with British government for human Rights and anginat black law that made by them for example, In servy conducted by the indian government in which mentioned school child very motivated to their history subject and shows better results in examination as previous time. Thus, history is not ignore able thing for student because our ansester done so many great things for us and they gives always positive vibes to

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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