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It is obvious that people find it difficult to define what happiness is due to each individual's notion of it.

It is obvious that people find it difficult to define what happiness is due to each individual's notion of it. GJmBw
It is obvious that people find it difficult to define what happiness is due to each individual's notion of it. A number of them believe that a happy one is someone who feels satisfied with their life at the moment. There is an exciting explanation of happiness as follows its separate characters, such as H for health, A for attitude, P for present, next P for play, I for inward, N for new, E for expressing yourself, S for smile and the last but not least S for simple. Health is considered to be the most precious, because when you have health, you can do anything you want. Always keep a positive attitude and always believe in what you can do. This will help you create a feeling of happiness every minute and every second of living and working. Putting your sadness past in a pocket with a hole in it to concentrate on the present. Having fun and entertainment is the best way to regain the spirit after moments of stress and fatigue. Take good care of your inner self, due to the source of all the emotions we have. Even though new things will help you get more inspired in life, at work but understand what you need, regularly create positive emotions so that you always feel happy. A smile is the best way to show yourself that you're happy, which will bring comfort to you and it will spread that happiness to many people around. On top of that, instead of being too preoccupied with things that are not worth it, take time for yourself, your family, and friends. To summarize, in fact, there are many things that can affect the emotions or happiness you can feel, but let's make things simpler by focusing on the present moment and appreciating every second, every minute that I have. It is my belief that this is the fastest way for each of us to find our own definition of happiness.
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people
find it difficult to define what
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happiness
is due to each individual's notion of it. A number of them believe that a happy one is someone who feels satisfied with their life at the moment. There is an exciting explanation of
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happiness
as follows its separate characters, such as H for health, A for attitude, P for present,
next
P for play, I for inward, N for new, E for expressing yourself, S for smile and the last
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but
not least S for simple.

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is considered
to be the most precious,
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because
when you have health, you can do anything you want. Always
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keep
a
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positive
attitude and always believe in what you can do. This will
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help
you create a feeling of
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happiness
every minute and every second of living and working. Putting your sadness past in a pocket with a hole in it to concentrate on the present. Having fun and entertainment is the best way to regain the spirit after moments of
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stress
and fatigue. Take
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good
care of your inner self, due to the source of all the emotions we have.
Even though
new things will
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help
you
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get
more inspired in life, at work
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but
understand what you need,
regularly
create
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positive
emotions
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so
that you always feel happy. A smile is the best way to
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show
yourself that you're happy, which will bring comfort to you and it will spread that
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happiness
to
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many
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people
around.
On top of that
,
instead
of being too preoccupied with things that are not worth it, take time for yourself, your family, and friends.

To summarize
, in fact, there are
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many
things that can affect the emotions or
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happiness
you can feel,
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but
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let
's
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make
things simpler by focusing on the present moment and appreciating every second, every minute that I have. It is my belief that this is the fastest way for each of us to find our
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own
definition of
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happiness
.
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IELTS essay It is obvious that people find it difficult to define what happiness is due to each individual's notion of it.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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