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English as global language world wide. Agree or Disagree?

English as global language world wide. Agree or Disagree? 8L87V
English as an international language will create a great impact on welfare of society and an individual. The advantages of English language outweigh its disadvantages. I agree to the point given and elaborate my views. Firstly, English is very easy to grasp and learn than any other languages. Unlike, Chinese, English has only 26 alphabets, which are combined to develop words and sentences. English had borrowed some words from other languages and other had taken words of English. Due to this, English can be easily understood in any country. English makes it smooth to travel around the globe. One can communicate well, using the English language. As an exemplar, If you are travelling to different countries like China, Russia, France or Germany, if you are not aware with English language, you may face difficulty in proper communication. Secondly. English is the language of modern world and technology. For example, You can surf the internet in the best way, if you know English. Many websites are built and published using English. People can easily achieve business goals throughout the world using English language. It can provide support to the Children studies as well. As every garden has weeds, it has certain drawbacks too. Some people believes that, English language creates certain cultural to extinction. However, Language is inter-connected to its cultural. The religious and cultural importance of the country appears to be in danger. As the Pros over takes its Cons, English is a language of modern and united world. English should be adopted as a global language throughout the societies of the world.
English as an international
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will create a great impact on welfare of society and an individual. The advantages of English
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outweigh its disadvantages. I
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and elaborate my views.

Firstly
, English is
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easy to grasp and learn than any other
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languages
. Unlike, Chinese, English has
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only
26 alphabets, which
are combined
to develop words and sentences. English had borrowed
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some
words from other
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languages
and other had taken words of English. Due to this, English can be
easily
understood in any country. English
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makes
it smooth to travel around the globe. One can communicate well, using the English
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language
. As an exemplar, If you are travelling to
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different
countries like China, Russia, France or Germany, if you are not aware with English
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language
, you may face difficulty in proper communication.

Secondly
. English is the
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language
of modern
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world
and technology.
For example
, You can surf the internet in the best way, if you know English.
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Many
websites
are built
and published using English.
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People
can
easily
achieve business goals throughout the
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world
using English
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language
. It can provide support to the Children studies
as well
.

As every garden has weeds, it has certain drawbacks too.
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people
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believes
that, English
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language
creates certain cultural to extinction.
However
,
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Language
is inter-connected to its cultural. The religious and cultural importance of the country appears to be in
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danger
.

As the Pros over takes its Cons, English is a
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language
of modern and united
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world
. English should
be adopted
as a global
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language
throughout the societies of the
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world
.
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IELTS essay English as global language world wide. Agree or Disagree?

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5 paragraphs
263 words
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