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It is never possible for an individual to influence change in society. Do you agree?

It is never possible for an individual to influence change in society. Do you agree? 3MLym
In today’s world, making substantial changes in society has always been a major concern for every nation. It is believed that these changes can be made only by the government, whereas others argue that an individual can make a difference and eventually change the society. This essay will address both sides of this argument and finally reach to a conclusion with an opinion. On the one hand, It is considered that government of every nation can make important changes in society by enforcing the law and conducting the awareness seminars. To put this in another way, people’s safety can only be ensured if the government enforces law and order in society. For instance, according to a social experiment, safety is a crucial matter in a society which is being expected by people from the ruling administration. Moreover, government should take effective steps in order to conduct the awareness seminars which will help people to aware and understand the acute problems of a society. Thus, it is clear that government plays a vital role in making a significant difference between a better and worse society. On the other hand, Despite government aid, individuals should understand the responsibilities towards the betterment of a society. Firstly, people can change the society by actively participating in the social activities. For example, being social activists, they will understand and resolve the critical issues of the society which cannot be felt without being socialist. Secondly, youngsters should be encouraged to attain a higher education and set an example in a society for others who have been demoralized in their life. Finally, a person should be helpful and kind to others and especially to those who are needy. Therefore, it has been proven that every individual has a potential to change the society by simply encouraging and motivating themselves. In conclusion, after discussing the both sides of an argument, in my opinion, although it should be the prime responsibility of the government in making important changes in a society, the individuals should also be matured and responsible in order to help society emerging from worse conditions and to make it a better place.
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, whereas others argue that an
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. This essay will address both sides of this argument and
finally
reach to a conclusion with an opinion.

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is considered
that
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government
of every nation can
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make
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important
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changes
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society
by enforcing the law and conducting the awareness seminars. To put this in another way,
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people’s
safety can
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only
be ensured
if the
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government
enforces law and order in
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society
.
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, according to a social experiment, safety is a crucial matter in a
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society
which is being
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expected
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people
from the ruling administration.
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,
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should take effective steps in order to conduct the awareness seminars which will
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people
to aware and understand the acute problems of a
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.
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clear
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plays a vital role in making a significant difference between a better and worse society.

On the
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hand, Despite
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aid,
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individuals
should understand the responsibilities towards the betterment of a
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society
.
Firstly
,
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people
can
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change
the
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society
by
actively
participating in the social activities.
For example
, being social activists, they will understand and resolve the critical issues of the
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society
which cannot
be felt
without being socialist.
Secondly
, youngsters should
be encouraged
to attain a higher education and set an example in a
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society
for others who have
been demoralized
in their life.
Finally
, a person should be helpful and kind to others and
especially
to those who are needy.
Therefore
, it has
been proven
that every
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individual
has a potential to
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change
the
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society
by
simply
encouraging and motivating themselves.

In conclusion
, after discussing the both sides of an argument, in my opinion, although it should be the prime responsibility of the
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government
in making
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important
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changes
in a
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society
, the
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individuals
should
also
be matured
and responsible in order to
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help
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emerging from worse conditions and to
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make
it a better place.
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IELTS essay It is never possible for an individual to influence change in society. Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
6.5
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