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Should countries encourage toursim?” Discuss.

Should countries encourage toursim? ” Discuss. JKqMj
People virtually make it a habit to go on vacation every year. Summer is the time for certain countries, particularly Europe, to resume travel, and a huge number of tourists rush to well-known tourist attractions in countries that are not just developed in tourism. Even though these locations are well-known, the countries continue to promote them and encourage more people to visit. Because tourism is so vital. Because tourism is vital to the economy, yet it is not always beneficial to citizens. Should countries encourage tourism if this is the case? (Nowadays, it is almost a routine, that people every year go to holidays. Summer is the time to restart travel for some countries, especially Europe, a large number of tourists flock to famous tourist destinations in countries not only developed countries in tourism. Even though these place are popular, the countries still promote them and want more people to come. Because tourism is very important for the economy but not in all case for the citizens. If so, should countries encourage tourism? ) To begin with, tourism plays a vital part in national economic development, with many countries' tourism sectors serving as the economic backbone. Countries expect tourists to visit particular areas more frequently if they offer attractive service packages. Local governments, as well as governments from other nations, were pushed to create local infrastructure that benefited both the people and the tourism industry at the time. ( local governments as well as governments of other countries are forced to provide local facilities that benefit both the people and serve the purpose of tourism development. ) On the other hand, the country's development must be managed and planned in such a way that the country's national interests are not jeopardized. Tourism can also harm the environment by destroying habitats, upsetting wildlife, impacting water quality, and posing a threat to local residents due to overdevelopment, overpopulation, and damage. Local cultural values are violated. Furthermore, when the tourist benefits serve only one group, mass tourism may not assist local communities. As a result, a suitable tourism development plan must be developed and closely managed.
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countries
,
particularly
Europe, to resume travel, and a huge number of
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tourists
rush to well-known
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tourist
attractions in
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countries
that are not
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developed in
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tourism
.
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these locations are well-known, the
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countries
continue to promote them and encourage more
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people
to visit.
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tourism
is
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so
vital.
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tourism
is vital to the economy,
yet
it is not always beneficial to citizens. Should
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countries
encourage
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tourism
if this is the case? (Nowadays, it is almost a routine, that
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people
every year go to holidays. Summer is the time to restart travel for
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some
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countries
,
especially
Europe,
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a large number of
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flock to
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destinations in
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.
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these place
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countries
still
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people
to
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.
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is
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important
for the economy
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not in all case for the citizens. If
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, should
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encourage
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plays a vital part in national economic
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, with
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countries'
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sectors serving as the economic backbone.
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to visit particular areas more
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if they offer attractive service packages.
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Local
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governments
,
as well
as
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governments
from other nations,
were pushed
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local
infrastructure that benefited both the
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people
and the
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tourism
industry at the time.
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local
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governments
as well
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of other
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countries
are forced
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local
facilities that benefit both the
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people
and serve the purpose of
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tourism
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development
.
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On the other hand
, the country's
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development
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must
be managed
and planned in such a way that the country's national interests are not jeopardized.
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Tourism
can
also
harm the environment by destroying habitats, upsetting wildlife, impacting water quality, and posing a threat to
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local
residents due to
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overdevelopment
, overpopulation, and damage.
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Local
cultural values
are violated
.
Furthermore
, when the
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tourist
benefits serve
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one group, mass
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tourism
may not assist
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local
communities.
As a result
, a suitable
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tourism
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development
plan
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must
be developed
and
closely
managed.
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IELTS essay Should countries encourage toursim? ” Discuss.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
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