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It is necessary to be competitive in order to succeed in life.

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I disagree with the idea that it is necessary to be competitive to succeed in life. Sometimes life offers no alternative to competing, but there are better options most of the time. Competing against someone else usually requires too much energy. Also competition often leads to somebody’s feelings getting hurt. I think cooperation is easier and nicer than competition. First of all, I think that competing is usually a waste of energy. Competition is about feeling superior to someone else, which usually involves spending more energy than other person. Take myself as example, once my frien. . .

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 that it is necessary to be competitive to succeed in life. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 life offers no alternative to competing, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are better options most of the time. Competing against someone else usually
 requires too much energy. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
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 competition This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 leads to somebody’s feelings getting hurt. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 cooperation is easier and nicer than competition.

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