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It is irrefutable to say that there has been mushroom growth of advertisements in this consumerism era. While few opine that adverts motivates people to buy unnecessary things others think they are informative about products which could bring positive changes in lives. I agree to the later view that it introduce the new useful products to markets. Undoubtedly, there are many people who do unintended shopping in the malls based on the adverts viewpoint. For example, celebrity like Salman khan who own their clothing brand Human being, advertise t-shirts, then people would buy it blindly even if they do not need it. Therefore, the fascinating taglines of ads by their favourite celebrity just entice people to purchase the items by presenting their features. However, if there are no adverts, people would not be aware about the new products specifically. With the improved technology growth, there have been new advancements in every industry on daily basis. Only the informative adverts m

It is irrefutable to say that there has been mushroom growth of advertisements in this consumerism era. While few opine that adverts motivates people to buy unnecessary things others think they are informative about products which could bring positive changes in lives. I agree to the later view that it introduce the new useful products to markets. Undoubtedly, there are many people who do unintended shopping in the malls based on the adverts viewpoint. For example, celebrity like Salman khan who own their clothing brand Human being, advertise t-shirts, then people would buy it blindly even if they do not need it. Therefore, the fascinating taglines of ads by their favourite celebrity just entice people to purchase the items by presenting their features. However, if there are no adverts, people would not be aware about the new products specifically. With the improved technology growth, there have been new advancements in every industry on daily basis. Only the informative adverts make aware people about the new items which can make their life more convinent. Recently, there have been many advertisements about the immunity booster products like bournvita, medicines, food items and many more which keep people hale and healthy, ultimately give them more immunity to fight against new viruses. Thus, people would never know how imperative to have these things in their palate in case there are no adverts. In my opinion, advertising industry is growing day by day which is justifiable given the number of developments happening around the world. However, people should analyse their budget before making any purchase and do not promote the use-throw culture through buying things which they really do not need. To conclude, adverts are essential to spread awareness about the products among public whereas people should be considerate while buying.

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