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Today man is master and machine is slave but tomorrow machine will be master and man will be slave KwYqL
This is twenty-first century, almost and every aspects of our life is assisted with technological inventions. It’s advancement and upgradation is augmenting in every minutes and so do our working style. Money is being extravagantly used in new research like making robots more intelligent, weapons more effective and destructive, more reliable drugs etc which in turn making scientists to focus more on new inventions even without considering their personal life. Some people think these inventions are good but on the other hand, other say these are just an augury of bad future. Even though, Sc. . .
This is twenty-
first
century, almost and every
aspects
of our life
is assisted
with technological inventions. It’s advancement and
upgradation
is augmenting in every
minutes
and
so
do our working style. Money is being
extravagantly
used
in new research like making robots more intelligent, weapons more effective and destructive, more reliable drugs etc which in turn making scientists to focus more on new inventions even without considering their personal life.
Some
people
think
these inventions are
good
but
on the other hand
, other say these are
just
an augury of
bad
future.

Even though
, Sc.
.
.
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IELTS essay Today man is master and machine is slave but tomorrow machine will be master and man will be slave

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  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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