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Success is only due to hard work Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful Do you agree or disagree

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Different people have different opinion about success, hard work and luck, and some believe that there is a strong connection between success and luck. However, others believe that luck does not play any role to become a successful person or unsuccessful personal in life. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that hard work is the only key to success. To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that success would not come to you without working hard. Strong determination, confidence and desire to achieve something positive in life should always be cherished in mind and heart, and such aspiration can. . .
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IELTS essay Success is only due to hard work Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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