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It is inform you that today site visit by M/S Aati Safety Manager and his instruction we need to be compiled below mentioned comments up to Thursday.

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It is inform you that today site visit by M/S Aati Safety Manager and his instruction we need to be compiled below mentioned comments up to Thursday. 1) All distribution boards should be covered along with safety sign. 2) Provide insulation tape for the all naked electrical wires level 32 to level 21 coridoors and inside rooms. 3) From tomorrow all HHM workers should be worn the safety gloves, otherwise tomorrow Aati safety will stop our workers lift area who's not wearing safety gloves. please need your necessary action to solve this issue to avoid any penalty from M/S Aati
It is
Consider using a past participle here: "informed".
inform
you that
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today
site visit by M/S
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Aati
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Safety
Manager and his instruction we need to
be compiled
below mentioned comments up to Thursday. 1) All distribution boards should
be covered
along with
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safety
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sign
. 2) Provide insulation tape for the all naked electrical wires level 32 to level 21
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coridoors
and inside rooms. 3) From tomorrow all
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HHM
workers should
be worn
the
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safety
gloves,
otherwise
tomorrow
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Aati
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safety
will
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stop
our workers lift area who's not wearing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
safety
gloves.

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please
need your necessary action to solve this issue to avoid any penalty from M/S
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Aati

IELTS essay It is inform you that today site visit by M/S Aati Safety Manager and his instruction we need to be compiled below mentioned comments up to Thursday.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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