It is a controversial topic whether technology and cultures are compatible or not. While technology gets more advanced, traditional cultures lose their trace as it is believed that they simply don't match. Thus, the essay will argue why, this is totally preposterous.
Despite it logical to think that it is easy to keep our old habits and traditions together with modern inventions, some people believe it does not make any sense. Because they don't like to live in a digital world where everything is computerized.
For instance, in Bali they tend to dislike computers and social media because they assume it spoils their inner peace. Therefore, modern computers and other advanced inventions do not seem to be friendly to those who prefer the earlier environment they are used to.
In contrast, coping with the technological revolution does not contradict with preserving our original cultures. Because we strongly believe in who we are and we truly know our origins. For example, ancient civilisations in Japan were not affected by the artificially intelligent machines or robots. It is for these reasons, it is possible for nations to develop as the universe does without losing their special features.
In conclusion, it is relevant to abandon some behaviours due to being affected by the modern civilisation. Consequently, the
Essay argued why this is only extremely rare. In my opinion, it is totally accurate to think that coping with modern life only makes our life easier and has nothing to do with distorting who we really are.
It is a controversial topic whether technology and cultures are compatible or not. While technology
gets
more advanced, traditional cultures lose their trace as it
is believed
that they
simply
don't match.
Thus
, the essay will argue why, this is
totally
preposterous.
Despite it logical to
think
that it is easy to
keep
our
old
habits and traditions together with
modern
inventions,
some
people
believe it does not
make
any sense.
Because
they don't like to
live
in a digital world where everything
is computerized
.
For instance
, in Bali they tend to dislike computers and social media
because
they assume it spoils their inner peace.
Therefore
,
modern
computers and other advanced inventions do not seem to be friendly to those who prefer the earlier environment they are
used
to.
In contrast
, coping with the technological revolution does not contradict with preserving our original cultures.
Because
we
strongly
believe in who we
are and
we
truly
know our origins.
For example
, ancient
civilisations
in Japan were not
affected
by the
artificially
intelligent machines or robots. It is for these reasons, it is possible for nations to develop as the universe does without losing their special features.
In conclusion
, it is relevant to abandon
some
behaviours
due to being
affected
by the
modern
civilisation
.
Consequently
, the
Essay argued why this is
only
extremely
rare. In my opinion, it is
totally
accurate to
think
that coping with
modern
life
only
makes
our life easier and has nothing to do with distorting who we
really
are.
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