Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past even if it will be expensive to do so To what extent do you agree or disagree with it

It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past even if it will be expensive to do so with it g5qRa

There are several monuments of the past in the different countries across the world. Some people believe that it is pertinent to preserve them at any cost, but others disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss why it is important to preserve the historical buildings. To begin with, monuments can be a great attraction for tourists and it can generate revenues. These buildings may be of interest to different people in different countries for different reasons and they come to see them. For example, people from different corners of the world come to see the pyramids of Egypt and it is a great source of revenue for Egypt economy. Thus, it is important that these marvellous structures are kept safe. Secondly, the old buildings tell many things about the past and history can also be understood better by the people. The designs of these buildings can tell how people used to live in the past and several things can be understood by visiting these places. For instance, the living style of Gandhara civilizations can be understood by visiting places such as Taxila and Swat, where there are several remains of Gandhara civilization. Therefore, for the understanding of history it is pertinent that these monuments are properly taken care of. In conclusion, it is of utmost importance that historical buildings are preserved as it can promote tourism and give a better idea of history. In my opinion, the past monuments should be preserved at any cost.

There are several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstonetabletmasterpieceslabpillartestament
monuments
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 countries across the world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 believe that it is pertinent to preserve them at any cost, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 others disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss why it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to preserve the historical buildings.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstonetabletmasterpieceslabpillartestament
monuments
 can be a great attraction for tourists and it can generate revenues. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 may be of interest to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 countries for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).reasons, and
reasons and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 them. For example
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontrastingdisparatedistinctdistinctivepeculiaroffbeat
different
 corners of the world This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the pyramids of Egypt and it is a great source of revenue for Egypt economy. Thus
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 that these Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.marvelous
marvellous
 structures are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 safe.

Secondly
, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 and history can also
be understood
 better by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. The designs of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 how You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
 and several things can be understood
 by visiting these places. For instance
, the living style of Possible spelling mistake found.AdharaAndhraGadara
Gandhara
 civilizations can be understood
 by visiting places such as Possible spelling mistake found.Taxi la
Taxila
 and Swat, where there are several remains of Possible spelling mistake found.AdharaAndhraGadara
Gandhara
 civilization. Therefore
, for the understanding of history it is pertinent that these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstonetabletmasterpieceslabpillartestament
monuments
 are properly
 taken care of.

In conclusion
, it is of utmost importance that historical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
are preserved
 as it can promote tourism and give a better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of history. In my opinion, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpriorcompletedspentformerprevious
past
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstonetabletmasterpieceslabpillartestament
monuments
 should be preserved
 at any cost. 