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It is important for children to learn right and wrong at an early age.

It is important for children to learn right and wrong at an early age. Nr88d
I agree with the sentence that the children must learn about right and wrong at an early age but I think some punishment isn’t necessary to help them to learn this distinction because I think some punishment is violent and dangerous for children. First, I think some punishment can’t help the children understand about right or wrong but they will remember about the thing that they got it done by violent acts such as hit by hand, stick or ruler and etc. But I don’t know about the punishment in another country too much so I will give my opinion from my experience from my country. Second, I think some sentences or words that their family and their teacher talk to their children make them feel bad a lot. Third, I think children must learn by themselves. If they wrong, their family or their teacher should tell the right thing and give the reason to their children. But if they right, their family or their teacher should give compliments to their children. I think the punishment that can teach good behavior is the thing that has a reason for their children and it mustn’t the punishment for violent action. They should tell the thing that right with a reason and give some examples to your children. In conclusion, The children should learn about right and wrong at an early age but the punishment as violent acts can’t help the children to understand about the thing that their family and teacher teach but they should give a reason and explain the right thing to their children.
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IELTS essay It is important for children to learn right and wrong at an early age.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
265 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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