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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.9

It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 9
The advent of the Internet has brought myriad advantages such as facilitate the communication. Albeit, this brings us convenience means of interaction, many believe it is not sufficiently reliable for gathering information. This essay will analyse both views before the personal opinion revealed. There is no doubt that the Internet is the cheapest and the most convenient way of communication. Considering video conference as an example. In addition, virtual space becomes prevalent among juvenile. It can be more tangible while many parents can talk to their children from hundred miles overseas. Consequently, the Internet makes communication easier by comparison with last century. But, is the Internet reliable enough to gain information from? This is a debating issue these days as the Internet become prevalent and accessible. Although it is easy and fast to find many data, it is somewhat pitfall whether these data are accurate or not. This will be intricate in the issue which is being interested in public as the gossips about that issue are more. Thus, seeking the reliable data can be difficult. To conclude, as mentioned above, the Internet brings many advantages for people, but it is vital to distinguish reliable sources among various tempting websites fo obtaining information.
The advent of the Internet has brought myriad advantages such as facilitate the communication. Albeit, this brings us convenience means of interaction,
many
believe it is not
sufficiently
reliable
for gathering information. This essay will
analyse
both views
before
the personal opinion revealed.

There is no doubt that the Internet is the cheapest and the most convenient way of communication. Considering video conference as an example.
In addition
, virtual space becomes prevalent among juvenile. It can be more tangible while
many
parents can talk to their children from
hundred
miles overseas.
Consequently
, the Internet
makes
communication easier by comparison with last century.

But
, is the Internet
reliable
enough
to gain information from? This is a debating issue these days as the Internet become prevalent and accessible. Although it is easy and
fast
to find
many
data, it is somewhat pitfall whether these data are accurate or not. This will be intricate in the issue which is
being interested
in public as the gossips about that issue are more.
Thus
, seeking the
reliable
data can be difficult.

To conclude
, as mentioned above, the Internet brings
many
advantages for
people
,
but
it is vital to distinguish
reliable
sources among various tempting websites
fo
obtaining information.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
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