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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. QepL
Nowadays, talent certainly describes a person’s qualities. Since some people believe that most humans are born with certain talents; for example in sports or music field. While others contradict that any child can obtain these talents by practice. I personally agree that even though some people are not born with special talents, we can teach them to be a good sports person or musician. However, there are plenty of children’s who are born with a gift of having a good voice or an interest in a sports section. Social media being an advantage in this generation, 80% of the population is using this mode to showcase their talent. For example; Yashraj Mukhate being a YouTube sensation has acquired a lot fans based on his unique talent for music and has also gained a huge amount of attraction from various famous singers. Though some people have talent but people who are not born with talent also learn from the start. Many people tend to gain interest by seeing the people in that background. For example, Sania Mirza being a professional tennis player has a lot fan following. These fans not only follow their lifestyle but also tend to get inspired by her so that they can also be like her. After gaining an interest in a particular field, children’s can practice their way through it and be a good sports person. In conclusion, I would say that even though people are not gifted with special talents, one can always obtain it by believing in themselves and having a proper training. Practice is what makes one perfect.
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talents
by practice. I
personally
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agree
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some
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people
are not born with special
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talents
, we can teach them to be a
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good
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sports
person or musician.

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plenty
of children’s who
are born
with a gift of having a
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good
voice or an interest in a
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sports
section. Social media being an advantage in this generation, 80% of the population is using this mode to showcase their
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talent
.
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Yashraj
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Mukhate
being a YouTube sensation has acquired
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a lot fans
based on his unique
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talent
for music and has
also
gained a huge amount of attraction from various
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famous
singers.

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some
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people
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talent
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people
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talent
also
learn from the
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start
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people
tend to gain
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seeing the
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people
in that background.
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being a professional tennis player has a lot fan following. These fans not
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follow their lifestyle
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but
also
tend to
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get
inspired by her
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so
that they can
also
be like her. After gaining an interest in a particular field, children’s can practice their way through it and be a
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good
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sports
person.

In conclusion
, I would say that
even though
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people
are not gifted with special
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talents
, one can always obtain it by believing in themselves and having a proper training. Practice is what
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makes
one perfect.
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IELTS essay It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

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265 words
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