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It is generally believed that some people are born with certaib talents, for instance for sport or musuc, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians.

It is discussion statement that some humans are born with certain abilities such as sport art and other ones are not. However it is sometimes believed that any young generations can be given ability to become a famous sportsmen or actor and musicians. My essay is going to be discussed by adding some reasons for my view coming to conclusion. Some young children are born with talanted at playing musicial instruments or drawing picture who always prefer intertaining activities so that the will be a great actor or musician actor. Certainly their parents genetic affects to their children therefore young individuals are skillful arts. Taking one instance to my opinion is that capabiling of teeneger may acquire majority of facilities and aminities because their households ensure every time to them. Another the best of thinking is that some young generatiions are unability they should learn from skillfull teacher. Talent is given us by God which is benaficial. However ability can be tought so that their parents out to give their children to special school for instance, musical school, sport clubs and another exersize of them than they may recieve more pleasure, by reason of they have a big desire but who have not faculty. If they really try to be a well-known sportsman, they will be great person Coming to conclusion is that both of you preferable, becouse genetic talent of childrens and learning ability follow to be a popular person in the world. I can say without any hasitation that teaching special field couse the biggest succsess and achivment.
It is discussion statement that
some
humans
are born
with certain
abilities
such as sport art and other ones are not.
However
it is
sometimes
believed that any
young
generations can be
given
ability
to become a
famous
sportsmen
or actor and musicians. My essay is going to
be discussed
by adding
some
reasons for my view coming to conclusion.

Some
young
children
are born
with
talanted
at playing
musicial
instruments or drawing picture who always prefer
intertaining
activities
so
that
the
will be a great actor or musician actor.
Certainly
their parents genetic affects to their
children
therefore
young
individuals are skillful arts. Taking one instance to my opinion is that
capabiling
of
teeneger
may acquire
majority of
facilities and
aminities
because
their households ensure every time to them.

Another the best of thinking is that
some
young
generatiions
are
unability
they should learn from
skillfull
teacher. Talent is
given
us by God which is
benaficial
.
However
ability
can
be tought
so
that their parents out to give their
children
to special school
for instance
, musical school, sport clubs and another
exersize
of them than they may
recieve
more pleasure, by reason of they have a
big
desire
but
who have not faculty. If they
really
try to be a well-known sportsman, they will be great
person


Coming to conclusion is that both of you preferable,
becouse
genetic talent of
childrens
and learning
ability
follow to be a popular person in the world. I can say without any
hasitation
that teaching special field
couse
the biggest
succsess
and
achivment
.
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IELTS essay It is generally believed that some people are born with certaib talents, for instance for sport or musuc, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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