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It is crystal clear that nowadays technology is highly developing and people are keen on searching news on internet.

It is crystal clear that nowadays technology is highly developing and people are keen on searching news on internet. 56LRp
It is crystal clear that nowadays technology is highly developing and people are keen on searching news on the internet. This does not mean that newspapers will not be used anymore. From my point of view, I believe that both the new trend and traditional trend will bring important news to a certain extent due to some reasons. Firstly, newspapers are the most traditional means of spreading news and information. Still, in this modern urban lifestyle, printed media takes place in society through the internet is widely spread around the world. This is because there are some people who are not used to developed technology and some places that cannot access the internet till now. For instance, some old people prefer reading newspapers even if we do have internet access. Secondly, most people think that the information written in the newspapers are trusted and reliable as they employ professional journalists and editors. Lastly, there are some people who love to read newspapers instead of looking at the computer screen. However, the internet is likely as popular as newspapers for a variety of facts. First of all, the news on the internet is from different aspects and areas. Besides, they are fast and we can easily read news in real-time everywhere. Moreover, the key benefit of online news is that we can share articles and discuss our perspective with each other. Today, people use many social platforms like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and so on to catch up on the news and latest article of celebrities. To conclude, despite online platforms are easy to use and presume the details and facts, some people are fond of reading newspapers. Therefore, I believe that both the internet news and newspapers will popular evenly in the future for the diversity of people.
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that nowadays technology is
highly
developing and
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people
are keen on searching
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news
on the internet. This does not mean that
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newspapers
will not be
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used
anymore. From my point of view, I believe that both the
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new
trend and traditional trend will bring
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important
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news
to a certain extent due to
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some
reasons.

Firstly
,
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newspapers
are the most traditional means of spreading
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news
and information.
Still
, in this modern urban lifestyle, printed media takes place in society through the internet is
widely
spread around the world. This is
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because
there are
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some
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people
who are not
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used
to developed technology and
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some
places that cannot access the internet till
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now
.
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,
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some
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old
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people
prefer reading
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newspapers
even if we do have internet access.
Secondly
, most
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people
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think
that the information written in the
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newspapers
are trusted
and reliable as they employ professional journalists and editors.
Lastly
, there are
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some
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people
who
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love
to read
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newspapers
instead
of looking at the computer screen.

However
, the internet is likely as popular as
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newspapers
for a variety of facts.
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First of all
, the
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news
on the internet is from
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different
aspects and areas.
Besides
, they are
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fast and
we can
easily
read
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news
in real-time everywhere.
Moreover
, the key benefit of online
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news
is that we can share articles and discuss our perspective with each other.
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Today
,
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people
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use
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many
social platforms like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and
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so
on to catch up on the
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news
and latest article of celebrities.

To conclude
, despite online platforms are easy to
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use
and presume the
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details
and facts,
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some
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people
are fond of reading
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newspapers
.
Therefore
, I believe that both the internet
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news
and
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newspapers
will popular
evenly
in the future for the diversity of
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people
.
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IELTS essay It is crystal clear that nowadays technology is highly developing and people are keen on searching news on internet.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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